갑작스레 영어 자소서를 쓰게 되었습니다만, 영어에 손을 놓은지가 오래되어서 그런지 정말 까다롭네요.

내일 아침에 제출할 예정이라 이력서쓰랴 자소서쓰랴 정신이 없네요.

구글번역기 돌려가며 겨우 쓰긴 했는데 말 그대로 개발새발이라 보여드리기 민망한 수준입니다.;;;

첨삭 좀 부탁드립니다..(__)

The cutting tools industry is an important industry that play a key role in the development of new materials and high-tech industries. And basic industry that play an important role in the competitiveness in the national industry.

Your company  is a not only South Korea's largest company but also world leader in cutting tools companies in the world market, accounted for 28% of the market share. And the company that expecting a brighter future than current situation.

Now, the world is facing a time of fierce technological competition. Therefore, it is necessary that your company use patent system in order to win the competition of protecting technologies.

I studied patent law as a materials engineer. So, I am sure that my knowledge of materials engineering and patent law will be definitely a major force in the development of your way.

Thanks for taking the time to read my self-introduction, I'm really hope to work at your company with your outstanding researchers.